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Thursday, 11 June 2015

THE ESCAPE… By Desmond Boom!!! “run Fred the police is are right behind us,oh but yeah thanks for the bombs,we made a huge break out dude”,Jason spoke with a loud voice.“Your welcome but run”, Said Fred. (Fred is the a tall man with a black bread and black and white teeth,he looks like a smart guy with a bald head but really he is dumber than he looks . Jason has always wears worn a mask scene since he was a kid,it is now part of his face,he is short and smart,(REMEMBER THAT NOW…) They were also wearing prisoner closes clothes. right now.(They are Prisoners). Jason spoke and said “shh let’s hide in here and make a fire”. “You do know that this place is a restricted area,? and also Ii'm scared of the forest, can you make the fire”?,Freddy replied with fear.,“OK”,Jjason said with a nice voice. The police could not find them.2Two hours later, tThey were all warm and cozy but then they heard sounds, break,click,click. “Run, get them”,it was the police,. Freddy and Jason thought they gave up but they should know by now police never give up. Freddy and Jason ran as fast as they could,. BOOM!,Tthey fell in a hole,“What hey we are in the a hole, hey we can make a camo hut,” they both said quietly. They hid till the police ran away.“There they’re gone lucky luckily,let's get out of this country and head to New Zealandnz”,Freddy said,”Luck ain't a word to me, we should get out of this country though”,Jason replied. One they arrived in At New Zealand,they did not do bad stuff there. but tThey became friends and worked as builders...The police are still looking for them. THE END…
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9 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 June 2015 at 10:51

    love your story Des.This reminds me of the time you wrote a awesome story and I read it,you should try working with your spelling.

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  2. Anonymous12 June 2015 at 10:52

    Nice story I couldn't really be bother reading the story so I only read about a little so yeah but in the little bit I read their were some mistakes so try and get some time to check

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  3. Anonymous12 June 2015 at 13:48

    Thanks Nate and Tugi cant belive u found my blog,Thanks for the comment

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    1. Nathaniel.u2 July 2015 at 10:34

      I was't aloud to be on this side of the blog or somthing but I did it anyways

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  4. Anonymous22 June 2015 at 09:55

    nice story Desmond.I liked the speech in your story

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  5. Anonymous22 June 2015 at 09:59

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  6. Anonymous22 June 2015 at 10:05

    liked how u used a hook in the beginning nd u should work on your spelling

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