My active reflection

My active reflection: Walt: Explain how something happen : i'll give myself a halfway thumb what are finding tricky with your work i'm finding tricky is my spelling in my writing

Explanational writing T3

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My 4 comments 20 August 2015

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Kebabs

Write your own recipe for an after school

Think about types of food you would eat after school Use the P.O.W.E.R Model

                               kebab’s (Snack time after school)

Equipment needed

.Sticks

.Fruits or vegs

0.wash hands

1.Buy a kebab stick (Not those sticks outside,The skinny bamboo sticks)(you can buy them from countdown)(I think)

2.Cut the fruits or veggies into pieces (Not tiny pieces)(you can use both)

3.Right after that you will need to put the Veggies or fruits on  the bamboo stick

4.then  wash the kebab with cold water

                             Hint:To make it DELICIOUS put pineapple

5.Now eat it(Have a nice snack)

WALT:write instructions for a recipe(Cheese rolls)

WALT:write instructions for a recipe(Cheese rolls)

SC:.List ingredients needed

     .List instructions in order

     .Have a title

     .Be clear + Simple

     .Use precise vocab

  Equipment needed  

    Knife.Cheese.plate.oven.Butter.bread.wash hands

 Instructions for a recipe(Cheese rolls)

1.  Turn oven on for 180 degrees

2 .Wash hands first  put bread on plate and butter it with a knife

    (you can cut the crust if you wish)

   

3.Cover top with cheese(sprinkle cheese )(not so many)Only cover top cheese

4.Roll it from sides,then deliver it to the oven with plate(you can also make more)

5.Make sure oven is on is on for 180.c 15-20

6.Now share it with everyone

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Great work des try use more interesting words,but good work by Alizay

Great job des by Elijah.

👏👏👏👏 good job by Dahn

Good job By mei

Nice work by charles