My Book Review Iv

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My book is called Goosebumps Son of Slappy

Its about a boy name Jackson who is a nice guy,everyone trusted him and he never gets into trouble.His sister is the opposite of him,then everything changes because of the Slappy dummy,Jackson kills it but there is one more,the son of Slappy.I only read half I think I have 4 more chapters left

Active refelction

Question 1 what helped me.My teacher my friends helped me

What are you most pleased with

With my learning

.Inquiry

.Writing

.Reading

Another 3 comments

Another BOOK REVIEW 3

This my book review (Goose Bumps Choose your own Nightmare)It was a really cool story ,my Night mare was about exploring the carnival of horrors,then it just got weirder,at  the end it said Finish Luke page 27 Finish Fiona Page 54 or Save them all page 5 , I choose page 5 then I die by the a crocodile , It was a cool story choosing your own decisions Here is the book

My book review 2

My active reflection

My active reflection: Walt: Explain how something happen : i'll give myself a halfway thumb what are finding tricky with your work i'm finding tricky is my spelling in my writing

Explanational writing T3

Turtle Cycle

Commenting

My 4 comments 20 August 2015

Instruction to do the coin trick

Kebabs

Write your own recipe for an after school

Think about types of food you would eat after school Use the P.O.W.E.R Model

                               kebab’s (Snack time after school)

Equipment needed

.Sticks

.Fruits or vegs

0.wash hands

1.Buy a kebab stick (Not those sticks outside,The skinny bamboo sticks)(you can buy them from countdown)(I think)

2.Cut the fruits or veggies into pieces (Not tiny pieces)(you can use both)

3.Right after that you will need to put the Veggies or fruits on  the bamboo stick

4.then  wash the kebab with cold water

                             Hint:To make it DELICIOUS put pineapple

5.Now eat it(Have a nice snack)

WALT:write instructions for a recipe(Cheese rolls)

WALT:write instructions for a recipe(Cheese rolls)

SC:.List ingredients needed

     .List instructions in order

     .Have a title

     .Be clear + Simple

     .Use precise vocab

  Equipment needed  

    Knife.Cheese.plate.oven.Butter.bread.wash hands

 Instructions for a recipe(Cheese rolls)

1.  Turn oven on for 180 degrees

2 .Wash hands first  put bread on plate and butter it with a knife

    (you can cut the crust if you wish)

   

3.Cover top with cheese(sprinkle cheese )(not so many)Only cover top cheese

4.Roll it from sides,then deliver it to the oven with plate(you can also make more)

5.Make sure oven is on is on for 180.c 15-20

6.Now share it with everyone

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Great work des try use more interesting words,but good work by Alizay

Great job des by Elijah.

👏👏👏👏 good job by Dahn

Good job By mei

Nice work by charles

Who's responsible for feeding Kiwi kids?

                                Who's responsible for feeding Kiwi kids?

Recently Campbell Live ran a story about Kiwi kids too poor to have breakfast.

We told you that research by the Ministry of Health suggests that roughly 20 percent of Kiwi households with children run out of money for food.

More and more of those children are having breakfast at school - low decile schools who really don't have money to supply breakfast.

But after our story ran we were contacted by a man named Victor who teaches at West Auckland's Wesley Primary School.

It too, is decile one, but Victor says they're doing things a little differently.

They're attempting to the stop the cycle of kids becoming dependent on food from schools, and instead becoming responsible for food at schools.

Watch the video to see Kate King’s full report.

Click to watch: http://www.3news.co.nz/tvshows/campbelllive/whos-responsible-for-feeding-kiwi-kids-2012090716#ixzz3gkww65J6

How to eat a Mellow Puff (Miss Furnell's way)

WALT: write instructions for eating a mellow-puff

SC: Be clear+Simple

       .Have a title

       .List instructions in order

       .List equipment needed

equipment needed:

Head

Mellow  puff

How to eat a Mellow Puff

.Get mellow puff

.Crack with your head

.till it cracks at the top eat the chocolate parts around it

.then eat the mellow

.then the bottom part

24 hours:Digtal-Technology

Insturctions

Instructions for making toast

1.grab toast turn on toaster

2.put toast in toaster

3.wait till it pops out

4.when pops out butter it with nife put anything and eat it

Instructions for eating an oreo

1.spin it

2.then it breaks into two pieces

3.then eat the first of oreo part

4.then eat the other part

5.enjoy

instruction making favourite food

Equipments  needed

1.2 buns

2.food stuff (letters and others)

3.sauce

1.get 2 buns

2.get whatever you need

3.put them in the buns

4.put bbq sauce or something else

5.make it big as you want

6.enjoy

instructions for making a new friend

1.Say hi

2.Play with them

3.ask name

4.keep playing

5.then your friends

Making a good tackle

1.bend knees

2.Do a anger face

3.then get their legs

4.don't be scared

how to put nail polish (not my idea)

1.get nail polish

2.tip on all of your nails

3.laugh

Pet sitting korra (rabbit)

WALT:write instructions for a pet sitter SC:Make instructions simple & clear 
> List equipment needed 
> Instructions in order 
>Tite 
(: Equipment needed:) 
>Cage,with holes
>Grass,long sized,hay,pellets,fruit veggies >Carrots,cut into pieces 
>Give the rabbit fresh air outside(own space)Fence around the rabbit 
>Water in a bowl,small bowl or water bottle attached to cage)


 (:Steps in order:)  
1.Fill the bowl every morning with water,put the bowl in the cage(with water)or bottle attached to cage) 
2.Give 3 carrots(cut into quarters,or give hay,veggies,pellets(just leave it in the cage)Make sure all treats are in the cage. 
3.Shower rabbit on Tuesdays,Fridays,& Saturday,Sunday.(Safety,have gloves on)any time only on these days 
4.Give space to rabbit every day at 3pm to 5m 
5.Give treats and a bowl of water at 8 pm,Then job done  

6.You can feed it if you want by just holding the treat,also look after it and play with the rabbit,(be careful from its nails)Don't lose this...

Camp times...

THE ESCAPE… By Desmond Boom!!! “run Fred the police is are right behind us,oh but yeah thanks for the bombs,we made a huge break out dude”,Jason spoke with a loud voice.“Your welcome but run”, Said Fred. (Fred is the a tall man with a black bread and black and white teeth,he looks like a smart guy with a bald head but really he is dumber than he looks . Jason has always wears worn a mask scene since he was a kid,it is now part of his face,he is short and smart,(REMEMBER THAT NOW…) They were also wearing prisoner closes clothes. right now.(They are Prisoners). Jason spoke and said “shh let’s hide in here and make a fire”. “You do know that this place is a restricted area,? and also Ii'm scared of the forest, can you make the fire”?,Freddy replied with fear.,“OK”,Jjason said with a nice voice. The police could not find them.2Two hours later, tThey were all warm and cozy but then they heard sounds, break,click,click. “Run, get them”,it was the police,. Freddy and Jason thought they gave up but they should know by now police never give up. Freddy and Jason ran as fast as they could,. BOOM!,Tthey fell in a hole,“What hey we are in the a hole, hey we can make a camo hut,” they both said quietly. They hid till the police ran away.“There they’re gone lucky luckily,let's get out of this country and head to New Zealandnz”,Freddy said,”Luck ain't a word to me, we should get out of this country though”,Jason replied. One they arrived in At New Zealand,they did not do bad stuff there. but tThey became friends and worked as builders...The police are still looking for them. THE END…

Camp

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